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After many years Maya’s children were returning home. Education, work, family of their own had kept them away from her for long. Hesitant to move in with them after her husband’s demise, the matriarch had stayed in this huge castle built lovingly by her husband.
During their time, the castle always hosted numerous friends, relatives from all over the place.Reminiscing thus, she got up to monitor the preparation of delicacies for her kids. After a very long time, the whole house seemed as if it had regained its life.
Finally her kids, daughters-in law and grandchildren arrived, & prostrated before her. She blessed them with long life and happiness. Seemingly happy to be back & promising to be closer home,one of her son’s attention happened to fall on a newspaper clipping which read, Auction of Estate No:- 37, to be commenced on Sunday.
Not believing that his house was to be auctioned, he called for his brother’s attention. Exchanging glances which read, who was to shoulder the burden of the old lady?
~175 words
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Priceless Joy for hosting the challenge. The challenge is to write in about 150 words(+/-25 words) a story based on the photo prompt. For more details please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Ohh it’s sad that they thought of her like a burden but this does seem to be a reality nowadays. Great story, Kitty
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Yea, it sadly is. Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading Shweta 🙂
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It was a pleasure! 😊
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🙂
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very well written , Kitty .
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Thanks a lot Moon 🙂
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Toooo ggggoooddd….a harsh reality…
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Thanks Sangbad .
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Welcome…
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🙂
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Sad but inevitable. A great take.
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Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading, Keith 🙂
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So sad! I wonder if Maya knows her home is being auctioned off? The children don’t seem to want to take on the “burden” of their mother. Great story Kitty!
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Thanks a lot PJ. Yea, I agree it is sad, but it is also a shocking reality in some families.
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Yes, sadly, that is true.
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Yes it is 🙂
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Lovely topical tale. Unfortunately it is such a common problem. Very well narrated.
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Yes, it is, sadly so. Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading YS.
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Welcome. 🙂
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🙂
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All too happy to see mama when they think they get to stay in the castle and enjoy its bounties…
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Hahaha yes, but sadly the kids didn’t have the right intentions. Thank you very much for stopping by and reading Russell 🙂
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Excellent writing, Kitty. I really liked this story. Well done.
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Thank you very much for stopping by and reading.
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