Fondly re-,
-membering, specially
during,the times when he was,
away,the longing growing ever so strong,
Reminiscing, flushes of pink when his image flashed across her mind.
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Acknowlegements :- Inspired by Radhika Mam of Radhikasreflections. Please have a look at her creation Sidlak.
This poetry form has kept me hooked. Rules to be followed while writing Sidlak form of poetry. The poem should consist of 5 lines with the first four lines following the 3-5-7-9 syllables pattern and the last line of the poetry should contain a COLOR highlighting the crux of the poem or the feelings of the poet. Thank you all for stopping by and reading. I urge you all to try your hand at this form, it is exciting and fun. Add varied hues to your poetry.
Applause on your maiden attempt at sidlak Aishwarya. Very well done indeed 👏
Just a small point, the second and fourth line exceed the permissible syllables.
I loved the topic you chose for the same. Great job dear ❤️
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Yes…in unison…
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🙂
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Oh is it, Mam? I’ll try editing it. Thank you very much for your appreciation and encouragement.
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Bang on maiden attempt…There is another format of it…the Long Sidlak…if you want search it at my blog…
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Thanks a lot Sangbad. Will read your article to know more about this wonderful form.
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