Yours or mine

P.C :- Sue Vincent

Concealing beneath layers of white,

Whosoever knows whatever be the plight,

For as long as light refuses to shine,

Head or tail, whatever lies beyond the line,

That line, on threshold of it,

The agony of not knowing what future holds even a bit,

For as long as light refuses to shine,

In whose favour the situation would turn, yours or mine?

62 words.

Thought behind the poem :- Light personifying brightness & positivity, as long as it refuses to shine, we wouldn’t know for sure what lies in store beneath the layers of white personifying the unknown & enigmatic future.

Acknowledgements :- Thank you Sue Vincent for running the challenge and also for the photo prompt at Chill # writephoto. The challenge is to write a piece with inspiration drawn from the photo. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.

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