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Imagining to be supreme,

Haughtiness gleam,

Selfishness teems,

Pride beams,

Self importance bursting at its seams,

I, me , myself only screams,

In all likeliness,

A tiny speck assumes mightiness,

Totality, not in the big picture,

Until ground beneath shatters, calling for a fixture.

44 words.

Thought behind the poem :-We often assume too much self importance until we are made to feel that we just a tiny speck in this vast universe.

Acknowledgements :- Thank you Sadje for running the challenge at # What do you see # 24. The challenge is to write a piece based on the picture above. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.

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