Would I fathom ?

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Do I bottle up my feelings,

Or let them run amok?

Whom do I trust,

When to give things a rest?

Fathom would I?

Poetry form :- Gogyoka ( five-line, untitled, Japanese poetic form)

Acknowledgements :- Thank you Colleen. M. Chesebro for running the Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 174 #PhotoPrompt. Thank you Colleen for the amazing syllabic poem cheatsheet. Trying Gogyoka for the first time, please let me know if I’ve done it correctly. Thank you Jude for the photo. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.

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