
Dark murky outliers,
Belittle the pain within,
I lie, seemingly,
In predatorily stance,
Grieving within, loved one lost.
Poetry Form :- Tanka (5/7/5/7/7 syllables)
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Colleen. M.Chesebro for running the Colleenโs 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 178 #PhotoPrompt challenge. For rules please refer here. Thank you Vashti Q. Vega for the photo prompt. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Very well penned lines, Kitty and the picture was too murky and scary though. Great poem.
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Thank you very much, Kamal. ๐
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Welcome Kitty โฅ๏ธโค๏ธ๐
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Kitty, your words inspired by the photo are excellent. I love how you grabbed the mood of the photo! โค
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Thank you very much, Colleen. ๐
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You’re welcome. โค
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An excellent Tanka, Kitty! Great take on the photo prompt. ๐
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Thanks a lot, Vashti. ๐
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Oh beautifully written ๐
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Thanks for the appreciation. ๐
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This is so deep Kitty. They really do suffer a lot of loss, those crocs๐
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Yes, indeed they do. Thank you, Jude. ๐
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Always a pleasure
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I just sent you our draft, you should go over and have a look๐
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Done. I think it’s good to go. ๐
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Tomorrow then?
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Okay
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