As one yesterday,
Now we are separated,
Unknown friends fly by,
Wistfully, eyes gaze for warmth,
Celebratory morrow.
Poetry form :- Tanka (5/7/5/7/7 syllables).
Thoughts behind the Tanka :- Often ,when I gaze at the sky in the evening , I see flocks of birds ( I assume, they are migratory ) flying together to their destination. More often than not, I catch sight of a single bird separated from the group and pushing itself to fly back to its group. Many a times I’ve wondered whether the bird which has strayed has gone back to its group or not. This Tanka is written from that separated bird’s perspective. The bird’s longings and aspirations.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Sue Vincent for running the #writephoto challenge. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
it’s amazing
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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you’re welcome 😊
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Beautifully written.
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Thanks, Shweta. 🙂
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My pleasure
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A nice poem, Kitty and apt picture of birds flying to freedom.
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Thank you very much, Kamal. 🙂
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Welcome Kitty.
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♥️♥️♥️♥️
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A lovely tanka, Kitty.
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Thank you very much, Sue. 🙂
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So simple and lovely tanka kitty
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Thank you very much, Sanjuna. Thank you for stopping by. 🙂
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My pleasure
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hi kitty ,you are doing awesome blogging .so I had nominated you an award..pls do visit my blog
https://sanjunaa.wordpress.com/2020/06/24/liebster-award/
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Thank you, Sanjuna. Thank you for the award nomination, I’ll definitely visit your blog. 🙂
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Thank you also for the deep thoughts behind the poem.Enjoy your weekend. Michael.
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Thank you very much, Michael. Wishing you
a happy weekend. 🙂
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Thank you! You too. Enjoy the Sunday!
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You are welcome. 🙂
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Thank you for your kindness.
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:-))
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what a beautiful tanka Kitty…
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Thanks a lot, Mich. 🙂
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