Sleek gossamer threads,
Effortlessly were they built?
Infinite attempts,
Trials and tribulations,
If only those threads could talk,
Tales of faith, recount,
Resilience he possesses,
Diligent weaver.
Poetry Form :- Oriental Octet (5/7/5/7/7/5/7/5 syllables)
This is my first attempt with this form.
Thoughts behind this piece :- I’ve always admired spiders, the never give up attitude, that they possess. The stories, we’ve read in childhood, about a spider, who despite many failed attempts/ obstacles finally manages to weave a web. This is dedicated to The Master Weaver.
Background of Oriental Octet :- The Oriental Octet is an invented verse form that appears to emulate the syllabic pattern of the tanka and haiku. It was created by James R. Gray who requests the theme of the poem be nature. It is an octastich ( a stanza of poetry containing 8 lines), unrhymed poem. Source:-https://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/oriental-octet/
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Colleen .M. Chesebro for running the challenge at Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 183, #ThemePrompt. For rules please refer here. Also linking up to Tale Weaver #281, a challenge from Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie (MLMM) . Thank you Michael, for running the MLMM challenge. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
The Oriental Octet looks to be a tanka and a haiku combined. Interesting. It does have a nice rhythm to it. Good job, Kitty. I like where this inspiration led you! ❤
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Yes Colleen, it a reinvented form, combination of tanks and haiku. Thank you very much for your words of praise. 🙂
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So fun to try new forms. Wouldn’t it be fun to have a contest for a new syllabic form? I’ll tackle that next year. LOL! ❤
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Yes, very much Colleen. I’m all in for the contest. 🙂
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Cool! That will be our project for next year… maybe during April and National Poetry Month. I think it would be great fun. ❤
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Yes, it would Colleen. I’m excited already. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Very nice!
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Thank you very much for the re-blog, Traci. 🙂
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You’re welcome, kittysverses!
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🙂
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Creative, lessons to learn from the spider. loved it.
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Yup, definitely, the never give up attitude, especially. 🙂 Thank you very much, Ma’am.
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Should try out this form sometime. BTW, the first word that struck me on seeing the image was ‘Diligence”, and you mentioned it 🙂
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Yes Ma’am, you should try out this form sometime, it’s interesting. Spiders are indeed diligent and hard working.
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Interesting form and a great reminder to try and try again
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Thank you very much, Jude. 🙂
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You’re welcome😊
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🙂
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If they could talk, I wonder what they would weave out of words 😀
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Mighty much, I suppose. Thank you, Shweta. 🙂
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Thanks Kitty for sharing your thoughts this week. Excellent response.
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Thank you very much, Michael. 🙂
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Very evocative poem. Interesting. It does have a nice rhythm to it. Good work, Kitty.
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Thank you very much, Neel. 🙂
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Interesting form. I’m sure those threads could have a lot to say!
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Yes they do. Thank you very for stopping by. 🙂
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