Assumed as rumours,
Spreading ceaselessly across the Milky Way,
Confirmed as truth later,
By messengers in our Solar System,
That, Earth was reeling under pressure,
From a deadly virus,
Scaring her inhabitants ruthlessly.
Friendly neighbours couldn’t wait any longer,
Choosing a date for a virtual meet up,
Mercury came in first,
Offering to join forces with Sun,
Enlighten every nook and corner about hazards of enemy,
And benefits of health,
Next came in Venus,
Offering to shower love and compassion,
In these times of pain and peril,
Mars choosing to,
Offer solidarity and support,
In these times of adversity,
While big brother Jupiter,
Choosing to shield us,
Through his sheer power,
Saturn, the ringed beauty,
Choosing to supervise,
Ensuring a smooth flow,
Different portfolios assuming,
Common goal perceiving.
Moon, the mediator,
With her crescent smile,
Happy the way things worked out,
Brimming with optimism,
As each one left,
Hurrying to fulfil their roles,
A promising tomorrow,
Conscious neighbours as them,
Rendering earthlings in a good space.
165 words.
A work of fiction based on real events.
Behind the scenes:-Some days ago, five planets, namely, Mercury, Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, happened to appear in the night sky/ pre-dawn hours along with crescent moon. I didn’t get to witness their appearance , but drew inspiration for this piece. You may read about it here.
Acknowledgements :- Written in response to Eugi’s Weekly Prompt Challenge. The word for the week is neighbour. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Brilliant take Aishwarya. Absolute beauty!!
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. π
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You are awesome! Absolutely awesome π
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Thank you very much, HS. I’m overwhelmed. π
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This is BRILLIANT! A natural occurrence, a word limit, a poetic arrangement and a story woven in!! Well done dear! Loved it!! ππ
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Thank you very much, Ma’am.I’m glad you enjoyed it. π
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I had read about that too but couldn’t see it. Beautifully written, Aishwarya β₯οΈ
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Neither could I see it, it was cloudy. Thank you very much, Shweta. π
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It’s my pleasure π
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Wow! This is amazing! I love how you wove your poem around real events. Brilliant take and thank you for joining in.
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You are welcome, Eugi. π
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Lovely…i learned something from you here.
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Thank you very much, Mich. π
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Genius!! Is there anything which you can’t turn into poetry… !
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Haha, thank you very much. I’m very much humbled by your generous compliments. π
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Wow. Beautifully done. I had read about it and hats off to your creativity of weaving the current situation and the event.
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Thank you very much, Shilpa. π
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Lovely take, Aishwarya! I think most in India couldn’t watch it because of rains.
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Yes, true Ma’am. Thank you very much. π
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You are welcome dear.π
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Aishwarya !! This is brilliant !! I loved the way you made each planet represent some emotions and the mediator moon !!! You have weaved a great piece !!!
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Thank you very much for your wonderful compliments, Nima. I’m glad you enjoyed it. π
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You are welcome Aishwarya π
I think it is easy to call you Kitty π
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Haha, you are welcome to call me Kitty. π
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thank you.. Kitty !! π
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Loved this piece! β€ It’s absolutely brilliant.
I couldn’t see the event too. It was either cloudy or rainy those days.
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Yes true. Thanks a lot, Anisha. π
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