Radiating,
Shimmering brightness,
Portal to a thousand expressions,
Eyes that see everything outside,
Longing in,
Those beauties,
That see hardly any occasion,
To meet each other,
Paving,
Gate to different destinations,
Clear path,
Tracks that run on parallel lines,
Near,
Yet so far,
They, which don’t find any reason,
To converge,
Eyes that don’t see each other,
Appreciates wonderful vistas of world,
Rather than long for each other’s visual.
Tracks that don’t converge,
Appreciates to be part of each other’s journey,
Rather than their union.
Long as mind maps positivity,
Priding on triumph over obstacles,
Fragrance of optimistic today, certain.
100 words.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for running the Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 149. The theme for this week is ” Optimism , specifically the lines, How far does optimism go?”. The line may or may not be used in piece of work. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Naturally beautifully designed isnt it π.. nice one
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This is exquisitely beautiful – the sentiment, expression, format and imagery! You rock.
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Fragrance of optimism ….. by Aishwarya
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Eyes that donβt see each other,
Appreciates wonderful vistas of world,
Rather than long for each otherβs visual.
Tracks that donβt converge,
Appreciates to be part of each otherβs journey,
Rather than their union
Ohh, beautifully penned, Aishwarya!
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Thank you very much, Shweta. I’m glad you enjoyed. π
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Fragrance of optimism and positivity so well composed, Aishwarya. Great poem.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. π
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Welcome Aishwarya ππ
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This was beautifully penned down! You sure have done a great job with the prompt π
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Thank you very much. π
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You’re very welcome!
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Oh, this is superb! A beautiful take on the prompt.
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. π
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You’re so welcome! π
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