Retrospective cosmos*,
With sanguinity in stead,
Dares to lay hands on,
Oh so! Delicate strings of gossamer,
Aware of its tenacious inward strength,
Albeit fragile outward deceptiveness,
These layers of maze it well knows.
Oft a muddle of incomprehension,
The perplexed prospective,
Gleaning for cues,
Anxious as much to mess with a mighty lair,
As to tickle a touch me not shrub,
Refrainment would be its approach,
Treading on ice, is that how it’d be?
75 words.
Cosmos * :- Here, cosmos can be interpreted as universe as a whole or a train of thought.
Thoughts :- Always an easy task to work backwards than forwards, retrospect has an edge, undoubtedly. Thrill, nevertheless lies in unfolding layers of unknown.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for running the Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 154. The challenge is to use the above picture as a prompt for your piece. Thank you Eugenia for running the Eugi’s Weekly Prompt Challenge, the word for the previous week was “Cosmos”. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Loved your thought behind the poem.
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Thank you very much, Shilpa. 🙂
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Lovely verses Kitty..and so true
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Thank you very much, Mich. 🙂
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A great take on the prompt. Loved the wording.
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Thanks a lot Jude. 🙂
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Your capacity to express so much in a single piece always amazes me.
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Thank you very much for your encouraging words, Ma’am. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
The perplexed prospective …. by Aishwarya
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Complexity in the pic perfectly mirrored in your verse, Aishwarya! Amazing work. Good to read you again.:)
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. Happy to know you enjoyed. 🙂
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I sure did!😊 You are welcome.
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🙂
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Lovely verses kitty 😊
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Thank you very much, HS. 🙂
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Beautifully written and thank you so much for participating.
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Pleasure is mine in participating, thank you so much. 🙂
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