
Pale as a flower,
That withers before blossoming,
Without having seen a ray of light,
Only darkness stole its way easily near her vicinity.
Conjuring all possibilities,
That could be her life,
As a shooting star whizzes by,
She wishes for possibility of life.
44 words.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Sadje for running the What do you see challenge #56. The challenge is to use the above picture as an inspiration for your piece. Thank you Whimzygizmo for hosting the Quadrille challenge# 116 at dVerse Poets Pub, the challenge is to use the word, ” possibility” in a poem (quadrille) of exactly 44 words.
Possibilities are there for everyone, specially those looking for them. Thanks Kitty for joining in.
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. It’s my pleasure in participating. π
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Youβre welcome
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Your verses are always remarkable Kitty, content is always precise to the theme and very well selected words!
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Deeksha. π
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Kitty, your poem starts very strong with the phrase, “pale as a flower that withers before blossoming” in describing the unfortunate woman living in a dark world. It finishes strong with the shooting star bringing a ray of light and hope. So beautifully composed! All the best!
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You’ve given a wonderful synopsis to my poem, thank you very much Ma’am. π
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Short, crisp yet a powerful message of hope. Beautiful Aishwarya π
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. π
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Beautiful poem for the given prompt, it is really inspiring every woman.
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Thank you very much, Megala. π
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Oh, I love the hope in that shooting star!
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Thank you very much, happy that you enjoyed. π
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Beautifully written, Aishwarya! β€οΈ
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. π
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My pleasure!
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A wonderfully wistful poem!
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Thank you very much, thanks for visiting. π
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