
Words remain unsaid,
For whatsoever reasons you’ll like to deem,
One day rushing to be said,
In strange words they teem,
The penmanship of a pen,
Pleads to flow,
What never existed until then,
Won’t satiate till the weight of heart unburdens its woe,
The fickle flames of night’s glow,
Seems to tease the threshold held for so long,
The pen continues emptying burdens not stopping for any rain or snow,
Amidst disarray of emotions, the hands continue unbelievably strong,
The written words now seem,
Like a wreath across rainbow of pain endured,
This night the unspoken words shall be buried forever and its brightness will gleam,
Only the paper shall know the pain, from everyone else it shall stay obscured.
121 words, rhyming alternate lines.
Thoughts :- Sometimes, I find myself writing all that I wanted to say but never did. It indeed feels nice after emptying the burdens on paper rather than telling someone about it and making them understand.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Sadje for running the What do you see challenge # 65. The challenge is to write a piece using the above picture prompt. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Oh my, this is sumptuously sombre and sad. Loved it.
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Thank you, Jude. Glad to know you liked. π
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I really did
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A unique way to handle thoughts. Thanks Kitty for joining in with this lovely poem
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. π Pleasure is mine in participating.
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Youβre welcome π
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Only the paper can feel the pain of those unspoken words…. beautifully expressed this emotion Aishwarya.
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. π
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Only the paper knows the pain … so true kitty … I loved it!! β€οΈ
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Thank you very much, HS. π
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You know this reminded me of a scene from the latest version of ‘Little Women’, when Jo is writing feverishly to finish her book!
Sometimes hearts pour out on paper….pain beautifully expressed, Aishwarya.
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Now that you’ve mentioned about Little Women, Ma’am, I’m reminded of that scene too. I’m happy that you liked, thank you. π
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My pleasure always, Aishwarya. π
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Well done! You have beautifully expressed the unspoken words.
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Thank you very much, Megala. π
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