Empty your sorrows in as much fervour,
As you share your happiness,
Don’t hold back to it,
It ain’t do you any good,
Like dewdrops on leaves dissipate once the rays of light sink in,
Empty your sorrows without any delay,
Amongst stardusts of immortality,
Strands of insanity hidden,
While fickle flames of mortality,
Burns day in and day out,
Silently sane,
Lingering.
63 words.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for hosting Reena’s Exploration Challenge #190. The prompt requires use of the word,”insanity”, in your piece. Thank you Sadje for hosting What do you see challenge # 91. The photo provided above is an inspiration for your piece. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Ooh, I love this. Such gorgeous and heartfelt writing.
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Thank you very much, Lucy. Grateful. 🙂
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So beautiful 😍
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Thank you very much, Aashi .:)
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This is a heartfelt poem Kitty. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙏
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🙂
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Haunting lines these…
Strands of insanity hidden,
While fickle flames of mortality,
Burns day in and day out,
Silently sane,
Lingering.
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. I enjoyed writing to the prompt. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Solitary Well …. by Aishwarya
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Great take on both the prompts, dear
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Thanks a lot , Shweta. 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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soooo beautiful Kitty…
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Thanks very much, Mich. 🙂
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Nicely done!
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Thanks a lot, Chris. 🙂
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Wonderful and deep writing, Aishwarya.
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. 🙂
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My pleasure, dear. 😊
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🙂
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Lovely poem. So true, that we hide our sorrows.
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. 🙂
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My pleasure.
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I too likes freeverses, we can express as much as here..
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