Feather Cloud – Image by A Kehas

There’s always been a template. From those who have lived before us. The permutations and combinations they’ve trialled and error- ed and come up as a way of life.

Sun and stars also probably live by these rules ( unseen by us here, but etched clearly in their books) as Earth orbits around. The August Sun rises ferociously. He is undeterred by the calmness that Lord Vayu ( Lord of winds according to the Hindu Mythology ) brings in.

Before winter and tranquility set in there’s still a bit of work to be done. Are surprises really welcome amongst these set template?

ants swarm, summer ends,
sun guiding through day and night,
hard worker’s zenith

Poetry Form :- Haibun( Prose and Haiku)

Acknowledgements :- Written in response to #writephoto challenge and dVerse- Haibun challenge. Thank you K.L. Caley and Frank for hosting. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.


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