stalk
those bright stars-
take refuge in your,
dreams, experience richer-
life,
bloom,
like night glow, without always,
flowing same course, like,
shadow in,
light.
Poetry form :- Mirror Oddquain (1-3-5-7-1 1-7-5-3-1 syllables)
More about Oddquain :-
Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Hand. ( Source :- Shadow Poetry )
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Val for hosting August Scavenger Hunt ( Form :- Oddquain; Theme :- Poverty) and thank you Colleen. M. Chesebro for hosting Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge ( Synonyms used for words(sanctuary and follow) used in syllable poetry are refuge and stalk ). Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Beautifully written, my dear ❤️🤗
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Thank you, Shweta. 🙂
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You’re welcome 😀
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These are examples of oddquains that seem very comfortable in being oddquains! It must mean that you have mastered the form completely!! Excellent!
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Thank you, Val. Thanks for taking the initiative to host the challenge. Humbled by your words of appreciation. 🙂
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I like this oddquain form, Aishwarya. It has nice pacing with your choice of words. Well done, my friend. ❤
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Thank you very much, Colleen. I’m happy you liked. Thanks to your weekly challenges, I started on this syllable poetry journey and it’s enriching. 🙂
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Great shape!
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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It’s a very beautiful form.
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Thank you, Jude. 🙂
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