The moon hangs in low this wintry dawn,
To see if the Sun has risen just yet,
Why do seasons change,
I’ll have summer all over again.
The chattering birds are not to be seen this frigid day,
In haste I turn to see, they are busy munching on a precious hardly found grain,
I’ll have summer all over again,
Why do seasons change,
When summer sun stops by until after twilight,
Citrus scents of lemon wafts across, cooling summer sweat,
Why do seasons change,
I’ll have summer all over again.
The hot embers on a cold night,
Fail to snuggle me of a long gone loved one’s pain,
I’ll have summer all over again,
Why do seasons change,
I want to sing again and again,
Summer sun!!! Pause awhile, don’t go just yet,
Why do seasons change,
I’ll have summer all over again.
144 words
Poetry form :- Mirrored Refrain
Mirrored Refrain
The Mirrored Refrain is a rhyming verse form constructed by Stephanie Repnyek.
The poem is formed by three or more quatrains where two lines within the quatrain are the “mirrored refrain” or alternating refrain.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB, etc..
x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem. A and B represent the refrain. (Source :- Shadow Poetry)
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Grace for hosting MTB at dVerse. Today’s challenge was to write a poem using Mirrored Refrain form. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Love this! The seasons really do feel so fleeting, I wish they’d stay a bit longer. I love the relaxation and slowness of the summer (not so much the heat), but I just want to cherish the time in it more. Very well written and beautiful how you convey this! Great take on the prompt.
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Thank you very much for your words of appreciation. I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙂
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Lovely, Aishwarya! I really enjoyed this one.
(To be honest though I would use your beautiful poem to lament the passing of winter, seeing how hot summers here are!) 😅
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. Yes I like winter too, but thought of writing about summer this time around. And yes, summers are indeed hot. 🙂
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You are welcome. And that’s a perfect reason. 😊
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Beautifully written, Aishwarya. It made me yearn a bit for summer too although I would much rather choose winter, just like Punam 😃
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Haha, I like winter too, but wanted to write about summer this time around. 🙂
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You make summer feel so beautiful Aishwarya 😊
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Thanks a lot, Ma’am. 🙂
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You put a smile on my face … summer though it brings heat is good for the soul, good for the body! Well done.
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Thanks a lot, I’m happy you enjoyed. 🙂
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Let it be summer all the year, smiles. I love the smell of this line:
Citrus scents of lemon wafts across, cooling summer sweat
Thanks for joining in. Have a good weekend.
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Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed. Have a nice day. 🙂
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I like the sensory images in your poem. The chattering birds pecking at grain, the waft of lemon on the air, the hot embers.
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Thank you, Li. I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Kitty.
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“The chattering birds are not to be seen this frigid day,” – I love this line ❤ I don't know why it made me smile. Lovely poem, Kitty.
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Thank you very much, Sunra. I’m happy you liked it. 🙂
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You’re most welcome ☀️
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