The night sky

My fingers fail to count the falling stars,
Pelting so hard like meteor showers,
They come striking- prickly thorny memoirs,
Waking up to superhuman powers,
Pink-purple-orange colours stream as,
Wavering thoughts electrify night sky,
Thoughts that haven’t found a hopeful voice as,
I struggle to find words, I try and try,
From depths of my being under night sky.

Poetry form :- The Novelinee (It’s a nine line stanza poem overlaid with this rhyme sequence:- a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,d)

Acknowledgements :- Thank you Laura Bloomsbury for hosting MTB at dVerse. The prompt is to try The Novelinee form of poetry. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.

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