
There’s more to sadness than just an expression itself,
That intense hurt peeking like a bodiless shadow,
Lingering and browsing, to prey on you,
And when you least except,
She peaks,
The feeling washes over and over,
If only she could reach the shore.
44 words.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Sadje for hosting What do you see challenge. Thank you Linda Lee Lyberg for hosting Quadrille at dVerse :- Word prompt :- Browse. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Well crafted 🙂
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Thank you very much, HS. How are you?
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Doing good Aishwarya:) long time since I’ve been here. Good to catch up 🙂
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Nice to know, HS. 🙂
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How are you doing ? What’s up 🙂
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I’m fine, HS. Life’s going as usual. 🙂
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Beautifully expressed! Thanks Kitty for joining in.
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This is so well expressed. That wave of emotion that drowns and never break against the shore – never diminished! Bravo!
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Well done Aishwarya!
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Great response! My favourite line: ‘…intense hurt peeking like a bodiless shadow’ – splendid!
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