
dew drops on morn sun,
wakes to aurora’s spell work,
zeitgeist phoenixes,
iridescence of purpose,
births fresh wave of tomorrows.
Poetry Form :- Tanka (5/7/5/7/7 syllables)
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for hosting Reena’s Exploration Challenge. I’ve combined prompts of last week #236( Re-birth) and current week#237 ( Zeitgeist). Thank you Sadje for hosting What do you see challenge #140. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
You created a tongue twister π, and then the depth and simplicity of the last line just takes your breath away.
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Thank you, Ma’am. π
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Freshness … By Aishwarya
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A wonderful mixture of all the prompts. The last line is just awesome. Thanks for including WDYSin here kitty
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Thank you, Ma’am. π
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Youβre most welcome
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ooooooh…. well done, Aishwarya β€
-David
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Thank you, David. π
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This is lovely, Aishwarya.
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Thank you, Ma’am. π
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Seamless weaving of all those prompts into this poem!! Love this one!
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Thank you very much, Val. π
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Beautiful piece and masterful weaving of prompts!
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I like this… xoxo
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0h, wow…just like what Reena said this is a tongue twister: poetic and brilliant one
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Beautiful combination of the prompts.
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Thanks, Jude. π
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