
vulnerability-
that moment of hesitation you cease to be yourself
hesitation-
that moment of expectation you invest in others
expectation-
that momentary trap, betrayal lays for you
betrayal-
that moment of choice serving as a ladder for growth
choice-
that moment of successful redemption
success-
that moment of vulnerability which goes unnoticed.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for hosting Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 242. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Brilliant poem, and a very effective format! Kudos to you…
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Classic! Love this poem
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Drops of Moments … by Aishwarya
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I adore the cyclical nature of this one – amazing work!!
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Wow! Brava!
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A wonderful cycle of words Aishwarya. Very smart how you have ended the poem with what started it with.
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