inward births outwards
stupefied –
perturbed soul searches answers
seed springs life within

winds rustle still clouds
time’s silence
if ifs and buts weren’t erased-
fickle sands of time.

Poetry form :- Shadorma ( 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables); Double Shadorma

Acknowledgements :- Thank you Colleen.M.Chesebro for hosting Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Challenge #289. Thank you Jules for choosing the Shadorma Poetry Form for the week. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.


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