even if draped in rainbow hues,
can it ward off everyday blues,
the sky isn’t my all time muse,
i keep the search on,
to shoo blues do i prep a punch,
for mid-day lazy-daisy brunch,
or resort to plain number crunch?
i ponder.
44 words
Poetry form :- An Ovi ( 8/8/8/less than 8 syllables, with lines 1,2 and 3 mono-rhymed and line 4 unrhymed) and a Quadrille ( A poem of 44 words)
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Val for hosting Scavenger Hunt, one of the prompts is to write an Ovi syllable poem. Thank you Whimsy Gizmo, aka, De Jackson, for hosting Quadrille Mondays at dVerse ( prompt word, ” Punch” ) Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Nicely done Kitty
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A punch would be a better choice! Lovely, Aishwarya. 😊
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“mid-day lazy-daisy” … I love that.:)
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Nice one Kitty.
Happy you dropped by to read mine
Much💛love
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This made me smile! Lovely flow and pleasant rhyme all wrapped in wonderful words!!
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Love your take on the poetry form!
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even if draped in rainbow hues,
can it ward off everyday blues,
the sky isn’t my all-time muse,
De-romanticizing the sky or anything else held in esteem is an art 🙂
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I love these lines, SO much!
“to shoo blues do i prep a punch,
for mid-day lazy-daisy brunch”
I am lulled by this.
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