Image by Briam Cute from Pixabay
like a wounded soul
pain evolves as night sinks deep
rises from above
light diminishes as
fallen strands of candle lifts
well of ignorance
consciousness reasons
duality justifies
rest is simple math
like flames of fire
responsibility is
a double edged sword
life is palindrome
joys reverse and sorrows swirl
reverse flip backwards
if one is unfair
and we offer the same meal,
would we all evolve?
Poetry form :- Senryu series (5/7/5 syllables)
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Colleen. M. Chesebro for hosting Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday #303, prompt is to write Senryu. Thank you Eugi for hosting Moonwashed Weekly Challenge # 126, prompt word, “evolve”. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Kitty's Verses 
Profound thoughts kitty.
LikeLike
So profound with beautiful lines! I love this stanza –
life is palindrome
joys reverse and sorrows swirl
reverse flip backwards
💖
LikeLike
These are all good, but the last three really resonated with me.
LikeLike
Nice combination of the prompts!!
LikeLike
Great thoughts of wisdom!
LikeLike
They are all fantastic! I love the flames of fire stanza. Responsibility truly is a double edged sword. Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
LikeLike
Wow… you’ve outdone yourself, Aishwarya. I think you like this form. I loved the last one best! 💛
LikeLike
So GOOD, Aishwarya ❤
~David
LikeLike
A good series! Nicely done.
Pat
LikeLike
Your final question gets to the heart of it. Powerful series. Bravo!
LikeLike