
P. C:- Terri Webster Schrandt
Terri says: “This is a photo of Nine Mile Falls, after which our little community is named. I captured this last March when the water district let out the water of the Spokane River to create Lake Spokane. When you drive by, the mist from the falls hits the windshield enough to use the wiper blades. In certain light, it really looks this green.”
silence speaks volumes
deglazed in shrouded chaos
intoxicated
a being ,penny’s worth in
nature’s conversant splendour
prayer, playful, pensive,
aspiring clouds of faith
cocooned in misty wraith
till sea emerges
every ebb and flow
songs of solitude transpire
pantomime mimics
life’s musical and death’s play
conversant timely humour.
Poetry Form :- ( Two Tanka(5/7/5/7/7 syllables) sets with Abhanga(6/6/6/4 where Line two and Line three rhyme) sandwiched in between)
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Colleen. M. Chesebro for hosting Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Challenge where we are provided the above photo prompt given by Terri Webster Schrandt. Thank you Eugi for hosting Moonwashed Weekly Challenge, where prompt word is , ” Conversant”. Thank you Jade Li for hosting Poetics at dVerse, where the theme is “Playtime”. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
This is exquisite!
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Beautiful
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Lovely 😄
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Very nicely done. I like your take on the prompt!
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Beautifully written, my friend! I ditto, VJ. 💖
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Thank you very much, Eugi. 🙂
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My pleasure!
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🙂
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Pensive and gentle, I love how your mind plays here, Kitty.
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Thank you very much, Li. Thanks for an amazing prompt. 🙂
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My pleasure, Dear Kitty.
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🙂
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Nature can be the best of friends.
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That’s true, Bjorn. Thank you. 🙂
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Beautifully written Kitty ❤
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Thank you, AJ. 🙂
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Nicely done!
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Oh I love this, Kitty! “cocooned in misty wraith” so apt since this is a seasonal waterfall and its chaos is only seen for a few months.
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Thank you very much, Terri. Thanks for an amazing photo. I’m glad you enjoyed my take. 🙂
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Beautiful. The image is so beautiful so is the poem.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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My pleasure, dear.
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Exceptional!!
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Thank you, Muri. 🙂
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I love your alliteration, Aishwarya. You’ve created a beautiful poem.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you very much, Yvette. 🙂
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Lovely, Kitty, I enjoyed your correlation of the water and the the cycle of life and death.
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Thank you very much, Robbie. 🙂
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Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write Kitty! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Sanaa. Glad you enjoyed. 🙂
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