Probably, probably not

jarred voice of secrets
raises eyebrows in a silent stifling space
if we were to toss a jar of lies
into the mighty ocean
would she offer redemption?

probably, probably not

what would remain
perhaps, her salty waters stinging tell- tales across twinkling sky?

Poetry Form :- A Quadrille

Acknowledgements :- Thank you De Jackson aka WhimsyGizmo for hosting Quadrille Monday #205 at dVerse, “Jar”. Thank you all for stopping and reading.

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  1. Love everything about this. It invites going back to read again and again. “silent stifling space” is powerful as is “salty waters stinging tell- tales across twinkling sky”.

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