
She sets sail without knowing,
what’s in store,
imagining calamities lying ahead,
an unknown land-
she embarks,
counting demons in dreams-
an unseen destination,
frightful of her destiny,
so far and long-
alive-
without any friends,
without an anchor,
counting stars,
away and gone.
44 words.
Note :- It’s been quite a while, since I’ve engaged in any form of writing and it’s evident that my writing has become rusty. All the more, it’s taken me a long time to barely pen down a few lines.
Acknowledgements :- Written in response to Quadrille Monday, where the given word was , “Imagine”. Also written in response to Poetics at dVerse, where we were encouraged to write about boats. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
A brave poem.
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I thought you did good! It is a great piece! ❤
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it’s lovely, Kitty….brave like Sadje G says and beautifully expressed 🤍🙏
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Aishwarya, I love how you capture the sense of anticipation and apprehension as you set sail into the unknown, vividly portraying a journey of uncertainty and solitude… Very poignant.
Much love,
David
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I like how the poem can be taken literally and/or figuratively–the plight of a migrant perhaps, or the story of anyone setting off into something new and uncertain. I’m pleased you decided to join us! 💙
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Not rusty at all!🙏🏻❤️
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It could be a metaphor for so many things! You captured that apprehension so well, Aishwarya. ❤️
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A wonderful interpretation of the painting! Rusty? I don’t think so!
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It’s like learning to ride a bicycle, Kitty. (methinks) You still have IT, dear one. Now all you gotta do is believe it. Lovely poem following two prompts. Wow. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.
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