deep down we know, we know, we
don’t last, and yet until yonder we
pin our egos like badge of honour,
we know, we know, we don’t last.
Poetry Form :- Korea: Hyangga :– The oldest form of Korean poetry. This form uses a 7/9/9/7 syllable count in a single quatrain. Repetition and alliteration is used. They have religious or philosophical themes and often discuss death.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Val for hosting Looking at Poems Around the World NPM Challenge. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Beautiful and so true.
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Truth.
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Kitty this one is so good! The repetition is perfectly inserted and the alliteration works as well. Yes the deep down knowledge is there – always there!!
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so lovely Kitty❤️
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