Joy of unfiltered laughter,
Sharing, merriment thereafter,
Euphoria of giving,
Smile, the sign of living,
With such thoughts, creation materialised,
Currently left with a question, who’s wise?
Inside my shell, I seek relief,
No time to comfort each other’s grief,
A cherry wave, countered with hapless stare,
Talking to one another, is it anybody’s care?
Such attributes, man’s present disguise,
Currently left with a question, who’s wise?
67 words.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for running the challenge at Reena’s Exploration Challenge #122. The challenge is to write a piece based on the picture prompt. For rules please refer here. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Thoughts behind the poem :- Nature created us with attributes of laughter, cheer, sharing and other pleasant things, slowly we are forgetting them and hesitate even to talk to one another.
Wise indeed! It reminds me of a meme saying “You came all the way to wish us Diwali? Don’t you use Whatsapp?” 😀
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Hahaha! Thank you very much, Ma’am . 🙂
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Who’s wise? ….
by Aishwarya
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Very wise poetic words so well penned, Kitty and your picture too was nice and apt. Who’s wise at the end of the day.
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Thanks a lot, Kamal. 🙂
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Welcome dear Kitty.
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😊😊😊😊
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I love this, “Smile, the sign of living,” You’re asking the right questions, Kitty!
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Thanks a lot, Li. 🙂
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You are very welcome.
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