A Collaboration.
Aishwarya and I are back with a rain collaboration.
This time we used the haiku form, with accompanying one liners.
And even wrote a Renga at the end.
She wrote in (light italics) and I used the (bold italics)
Hope you enjoy this.
Through the rain
Do you see it,
Rolling in on darkened clouds.
Can you catch its elysian scent,
Tumbling on the torrent winds.
A promise,
And a warning!
The feeling that things will not be the same,
Cleansed?
Or scourged?
Through her incessant,
Downpour, she communicates,
Forlorn or happy?
When it rains, cheer on Earth reigns, is nature happy unburdening herself?
For erosion smoothes the rough edges, and draws new lines of potential.
As deluge cascades
Reflections of the self glisten
Splashes of new life
Tears renew spirit
So does rain, washes old.
New memories made
Sometimes a tear or two energises self…
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Cheers my friend ❤️
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Beautiful and such a great collaboration. So wonderfully composed poem and the picture too was so lovely.
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Thank you very much, Kamal. Sorry for the very late response. 🙂
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Welcome Aishwarya and it is completely okay. Take care and stay safe 💖💖
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Thanks Kamal. 🙂
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼🙏🙏🙏
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Wonderful collab, Aishwarya! I left a comment on Jude’s blog post. 🌷😊
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. Yes, I saw that comment, too, thank you. Sorry, I’ve been late in responding. 🙂
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No worries, dear. You are welcome. 😊
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Beautifully done. Loved this collaborative effort Aishwarya 💕
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Thank you very much, Ma’am. Sorry, I’ve been late in responding. 🙂
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Beautiful collab! 😍💙 Wow!
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Thank you very much, Priya. 🙂 Sorry, I’ve been late in responding.
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It’s ok dear 🙂
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Wonderful collaboration, Aishwarya! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Anisha. Sorry, I’ve been late in responding. 🙂
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