This human being is pondering,
What would be she be if not a soul encased in a human form, respiring?
Soaring eagle daring to touch the sky,
Ferocious tiger predating ferociously shy?
A leaf nearing end from a broken twig,
Or a peacock wooing with its latest jig?
This human being is wondering,
Human beings crave to carve an individuality for themselves considering,
Every other creation is identified collectively,
While we look to be identified specifically,
Yearning to be different from the rest,
Are we succeeding in this test?
This human being is contemplating,
We know a crow as a crow and not by its name debating,
Its individual identity,
Then why we do attach so much importance to this self-identity,
Signing off as human being collectively,
Far more precious than my individual identity optimistically,
This human being is thus concluding,
This soul encased in a human form is a reflection of the past generations, including,
A mirror to the future generations, exuding,
A torch bearer of every human inhabiting,
From the past,
Till future lasts.
176 words.
Acknowledgements :- Thank you Reena Saxena for hosting Reena’s Exploration Challenge # 176 and Kim for hosting Poetics at dVerse. Thank you all for stopping by and reading.
Very beautifully expressed!
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Loaded with insights. I agree with ‘Yearning to be different from the rest,”
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
This Human Being ….. by Aishwarya
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Enjoyed your meditation on being human.
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I enjoyed your poetic musings. 🙂
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Thank you very much, thanks a lot for stopping by. 🙂
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All hail the torchbearers!
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This is absolutely profound! I resonate with; “Human beings crave to carve an individuality for themselves considering, every other creation is identified collectively.” Yes! 🙂
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Thank you very much, Sanaa, I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙂
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It’s wonderful
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Thanks a lot, Athira. 🙂
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I love the reflection on our ancestors, and the generations to come. Makes me think of that quote – you come from the love of thousands.
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That’s a lovely quote, never heard of it, Thanks for sharing. Thanks for stopping by and complimenting. 🙂
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This is profound, Kitty. If we could all believe this and act as one, in the interests of humanity in the tapestry of life, just think how far we could get.
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Yes, indeed Li. Thank you very much. 🙂
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You’re very welcome, Kitty.
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Most welcome
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🙂
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I like the way you tweaked the prompt words and developed them into a beautifully pondering, philosophical poem, Kitty. The repetition of ‘This human being is’ is effective, together with the juxtaposition of soaring eagle/tiger, to convey the wide range of human emotions and abilities, and the striving for self-identity and individuality, very human traits. My favourite line: ‘This soul encased in a human form is a reflection of the past generations’.
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Thank you very much, Kim for your words of appreciation and an elaborate analysis, very much appreciated. Thank you for hosting a wonderful challenge, I enjoyed writing to it. 🙂
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I’m glad you joined us. It’s Open Link Night tonight and you can join the live version too. The link will be in the website when it goes live.
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Thanks a lot for the invite, sorry wasn’t able to join the last time will try joining next time around. Sorry about the late reply too. 🙂
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Our humaness is a reflection of so many things, as well expressed in this excellent piece!
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Thank you very much. 🙂 Thanks a lot for stopping by.
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Beautiful. I love.
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Thank you very much. Thanks a lot for stopping by. 🙂
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Outstanding poetry Kitty.
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Thank you very much, Jude. 🙂
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My pleasure 🍁
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🙂
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You penned down some really deep thoughts there. Always fun to read your poetries.
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I’m elated with your comment, Muskan. Thanks a lot for the support. 🙂
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